Monday, 15 May 2017

Week 10 - Class

Pit Lecture and class notes:



Development whilst waiting for teachers:


Printed and looking at my brochure, it is looking really boring currently and needs a lot added to it. 








More colour - also the time table is really boring?


These timetables are not working at all -

RESEARCH






TIMETABLE DESIGN:

Looking at Semi-permenent conference -














Critique on my work:

Lee mostly said its shit. I need to go back to the beginning. My work isn't saying the future it isn't saying much and when looking at it you don't see or understand this at all. I need to change this and do a lot more and keep going forward. 

I need to change and re-work this design. Go back to the poster, work on the style and come up with a nice design style.

Look at artist models, the symbols of the future etc. 


So back to square 1 - new title as well. 

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