Printout to present for critique -
Printed versions of my above work for critique, I think they are looking well resolved and relating well over the contexts.
This brochure is looking good and I am happy with where it is now, the style and reading of it as a book has definitely improved the overall feel of the work. One critique I have has is the size of the text, it is feeling too large right now and I think it needs to be smaller to read better.
Type developed:
I made the type smaller for critique and it is looking much better.
Critique with Lee -
Overall all my designs are working cohesively together, Lee outlined a few things which need slight refinement - these are circled below. From here I will refine these and print out my brochure one more time then I will - hopefully have everything finalised!
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